Thursday, 26 October 2017
100 Word Challenge Week #7
One afternoon I was slumped on my couch, knowing that my parents would not be home before 5:00pm, so I looked at the time on the stove and it read 3:00 in the afternoon. I decided I would watch two episodes of Spongbob-Squarepants then grab some snacks from my pantry. I jumped off my couch and flipped a switch that was on the wall on the other side of the room. Now that the lights were off, I could start watching T.V. but as I was going to sit, I heard the lock click!, as the door slammed, I knew I had to hide!..
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Hello Inusealias,
ReplyDeleteYour story has a suspenseful ending! You have used some descriptive vocabulary e.g. "slumped" and "flipped". Try to add even more interesting words. Avoid repeating words in a short piece of writing like this e.g. 'couch'. Well done on completing Week #7 of the 100 Word Challenge.
Sincerely,
Mrs. Van