As I was finishing my daily dog walk my dog Daxter went over to
two humungous trees and starting sniffing them like crazy! "That is not
like Daxter!" But I let him do his business and looked away. After about
30 seconds I felt a little tug on his leash, I looked back and Daxter was gone!
Daxter's leash was tied to something
that looked like a plaque!
Then when I walked towards the silver plaque there was this strange figure
wearing a shiny metallic cloak! I’ve never seen this before on any of my dog
walks! I’m so terrified
!..
Hello Inusealias,
ReplyDeleteI appreciate how you have included a different word to start most sentences, as this was part of today’s lesson. You have used a couple of interesting words, 'humongous' and 'metallic'; I'm sure you can include more descriptive vocabulary e.g. 'extendable leash'. Please avoid topics like a dog 'doing his business'. In future, please publish your write using 12 font. Keep on writing and improving.
Sincerely,
Mrs. Van